I will be stepping away from this painting for now. I've learn what I can. Lessons learned? Simplify values and be bold with what you choose (thanks Tim Coman). I was timid, safe and non-committal. My darks were not dark, lights were not light. That left the painting with no focus or an entry point for the viewer. What a great lesson!
Onto the next one.
Acrylic on Board, 36 x 24 inches
Sorry for the horrible pictures. Need to get an actual camera instead on using my phone :)